Correct this following incorrect text!!!
bandengan Beach
Bandengan Beach Or Tirta Samudra Beach. is the famous beach in jepara. The place is very beautiful and clean people around Jepara Kudus Demak knows this place.
this place is located 7 kilometers north of Jepara city center the way to get there is very easy. Just Follow the Traffic Sign and you will find it from the town square, follow the road to Bangsri then turn left when reached kuwasen village. you can take public transportation or by your, own, vehicle
The white sandy beach which has pure water is good for swimming the beach is save enough for swimming because the beach is shallow and the wave is not so big. This place is more beautiful. at dusk We can see the beautiful sunset with our family or friends.
In this location we can sit and relax on the shelter while enjoy the natural beach. breezy wind, it also has large pandan tree field. It is suitable for youngster activities such as camping.
Just sent your writing to my email ... yosepade13@gmail.com ....
This blog is good. It is simple blog and the activity is divided into some parts/activities that ease students to choose the activity.
BalasHapusbut it will be better if the instruction is made more specific, for instance in this activity, activity 3 it will be better if you get your students to correct the tenses or some words that incorrect in this passage not incorrect text, it's too general.